Short Script Reflection

In my short film I would say that my best scene is when Carmen tells Ms. Louis how she crashed her car into the tree. The reason I like it is because of how Ms. Louis reaction is to when she sees the car.  I would say my worst scene is when Carmen tells Ms. Beth how her house got dirty. I just feel that there was not enough detail in that scene. The thing that I would do to improve my script is that I would try and cut the beginning a little bit. If I have a short beginning I can have more details of what is going on later on in the script.